Part One: Subject of the Psalm
Y N The psalmist chose an appropriate topic and asked God to act in a way consistent with the Divine character
3 points no credit
Part Two: Formal Features of the Psalm
Original Lament Psalm
Grading Protocol
14 November 2005
1. This was a communal an individual lament
2. The psalm clearly and obviously included the following features of the lament form (2 points each, A–F; 3 points for oracle)
2 points A. Invocation of God's Name (i.e., the psalm named God directly, preferably in the vocative mood, and called upon God to help her/him/the community)
2 points B. Description of present need (i.e., the psalmist stated what ailment she/he/the community is suffering, who has wronged her/him/the community, or what bad events she/he/the community is experiencing)
2 points C. Prayer for help and deliverance, preferably in the imperative mood (i.e., the psalmist told God what to do).
2 points D. Reasons why God should help the psalmist/community (i.e., the psalmist stated what she/he/the community has done for God, or that should be pleasing to God)
2 points E. Vow to offer praise or sacrifice when the petition is heard (i.e., the psalmist stated that she/he/the community will sacrifice the fatted calf or offer some other form of praise to God)
bonus 3 points **This psalm included an oracle of salvation
2 points F. Grateful praise to God (i.e., the psalmist gave thanks to God for granting the request stated in Part C)
Part Three: Quality of the Composition
 
10
Perfect work
 
8
One or two punctuation mistakes OR one spelling or grammatical or syntactical error
 
6
Three or more punctuation mistakes OR two spelling or grammatical or syntactical errors
 
4
Three spelling or grammatical errors OR several punctuation mistakes and one or two spelling or grammatical or syntactical errors
 
2
Four spelling or grammatical errors OR several punctuation mistakes and three spelling or grammatical or syntactical errors
 
0
More than four spelling or grammatical errors OR several punctuation mistakes and four spelling or grammatical or syntactical errors
 
Total Points (of 25)
  less points for late submission
 
Net Points